第 1 段第 1 句 Indicated above is a picture that describes/portrays `````` 或 The picture above vividly describe``` 第 1 段第 2 句 The number of xx is decreasing/increasing at an accelerating speed. 第 1 段第 3 句 But is this what the author means to tell the observers? Certainly not! 或 At the first glimpse, you will find the picture is so simple that it deserves little explanation, but only a sensible observer can capture its essence. 第 2 段开头 Simple as picture is, it does reveal certain disturbing social phenomenon, that is, parents tend to overlook the fact that nothing is more harmful and damaging than excessive protection. Numerous case exists to illustrate why excessive protection is harmful but one will suffice. 第二段中间（任选几句） 是否应该为一种后果负责 They refuse to claim/shoulder/assume responsibility. 节约还是浪费时间 They can(not) make the most of time, instead, they idle time away. 提供就业，增加税收 It can not only secure employment, but augment revenue as well. 环境 They can lead to air pollution, noise pollution, soil erosion, extinction of wild species, greenhouse effects. 代表先进价值观念 It can stand for a tradition of hospitality, or wisdom of its people. 或 They can lead the fashion, symbolizing a vanguard spirit. 或 It can teach people treat others with sympathy, sincerity and love. 或 It brings honor and prestige to its people. 方便快捷 It can supply people with a dominant means of transportation or telecommunication that greatly reduces the distance between people. 或 It can smooth the communication, or rid of barrier between residents as well.
能了解更多信息 It can provide people with an easy access to a bulk of up to date, concrete, accurate or vivid information. 是否提供一种主要娱乐方式 It can be a major means of entertainment/diversion that can free people from routine work, pressure, tension, burden or boredom. 是否保持健康 It can (not) keep fit mentally or physically. 或 They provide people with fresh air, delicious food, comfortable dwellings or a wide range of medical service. 是否缓解压力焦躁和郁闷 People can relieve their pressure, anxiety, depression, isolation or solitude. 是否安全 People can (not) secure their food, shelter or job. 或 It can (not) shield xx from hazard, injury or accidents. 或 It can safeguard deception, fraud, scheme, robbery or assault. 是否培养健康人格 It can (not) cultivate talent, confidence, self-worth, self-reliance, dignity, inspiration, exploration, or creation. 是否能应付未来挑战困难 They can (not) dare challenge, hardship, ordeal or tribulations. 竞争中的机会多不多 They can owe more/few opportunities in the competition. 得到的帮助多不多 They can obtain more/less assistance, financial aid, mental comfort, material support or spiritual back-up. 这么做是否改善了 They can (not) better their skills or performance in their jobs or study. 这么做成功的可能性大不大 They are more/less likely to achieve themselves in their prospective career. 第三段 虚拟 But for confidence, we could not have contributed all our energy and enthusiasm to this competitive test. Let alone pursuing a master or doctor degree. 不会有好结果 In my view, this action and attitude, in large measure, will exert negative effects.
利大于弊，弊大于利 The disadvantage will probably overshadow the benefits. 或 The problems seem to be pale compared with various benefits. 或 The various problems are dwarfs by benefits. 或 The gain is canceled out by the problem. 设立宗教词 Obviously, a man is created to strive for excellence and challenge limit. As Martin Luther King put it, ‘to hew from a mountain of despair a stone of hope.’ 引用名言 Obviously, a new era is calling us, so we have no choice but strive for excellence, challenge limit. As Martin Luther King put it, ‘to hew from a mountain of despair a stone of hope.’ 拟人句 Should we extend greeting arms toward future with sincerity and enthusiasm, a harmonious life must be waving at us at the horizon. 反问 In this way, can a bright future be? Behind. 强调 In a word, it is endless effort that brings success. 古今对比 The xx was once considered trivial or insignificant, but nowadays is not only necessary, but indispensible as well. 有无对比（红色可替换） Without confidence, we don’t have hope. But with confidence, we never lack hope. 倒装 Only in this way, can a bright future be. 排比 Without confidence, how can we go in for this competitive test? Without confidence, how can we pursue a master or doctor degree? Without confidence, how can we contribute all our energy and enthusiasm to this exam?记得老师讲的时候，说关键在于第二段中间的十几句话，到时选出几句能用的， 用这些连词连接： On one hand-for another thing-also-what’s more-still-over all-otherwise.