包含 所有内容要点，紧扣主题，结构完整，条理清晰，能恰当使用连 接词表示各种逻辑关系；语句流畅，表达清楚准确；使用较为丰 富的语法结构和词汇，且错误极少；书写规范，字数符合要求。
基本 上包含所有要点，紧扣主题，结构较为完整，条理清晰，能使用 正确的连接词；语句完整，意思清楚；语法和词汇方面错误较少 且不妨碍理解；书写较为规范，字数符合要求。
包含主要内容 要点，结构欠完整，但不影响文章整体效果；少数语句不通顺， 意思基本清楚；语法和词汇方面存在一些错误；书写基本规范， 字数基本符合要求。
能写 出一些关键句子，但句式单调，词汇有限；写作内容缺少连贯性， 影响理解；语法结构和词汇错误较多；书写欠规范，字数过少。
能写出与写作 内容相关的个别句子，但语句不完整，语法和词汇错误很多，书 写不规范。
不得分（0 分）：写作内容与所要求内容无关或所写内容无 法看清；写作中抄袭阅读篇章中与作文话题无关的句子或段落。
要求词数不少于 60 词，可适当发 挥。
提示：1.姓名、性别、年龄； 2.兴趣爱好； 3.家庭成员Li Ming is my good friend. He is twelve years old. He is a nice boy.He likes football, basketball and table tennis. He plays them onSaturday and Sunday. He likes reading too. He reads books after school.This is Li Ming’s mother. She likes table tennis. And this is LiMing’s father. His favourite sport is football. Li Ming likes to play sportswith his parents.2假设你们班刚来了一位新同学，请根据以下表格的内容，写一篇不少于 60 词的 短文介绍你的新同学。
NameLi HuanhuanEnglish nameHelenFromShanghaiHow old11years oldFavourite sportTable tennisFavourite colourWhiteI have a new classmate. Her name is Li Huanhuan. And her English nameis Helen. She is a nice girl. She is from Shanghai. It is a very big city inChina. She is eleven years old. Her favourite sport is table tennis andwhite is her favourite colour. I like table tennis too. We often play it afterschool.
成员爸爸妈妈哥哥妹妹我职业老师护士学生/学生爱好踢足球打网球打篮球画画读书I am Jenny. There are five people in my family. They are my parents, mybrother, my sister and I. My father is a teacher at a school. He likesplaying football. My mother is a nurse at a hospital. She likes playingtennis. Tom is my brother. He is a student. He likes playing basketball.My sister is five years old. She likes drawing. I am a student too. I likereading. I love my family very much.4假如张红是你的同班同学。
不少于 60 词，可适当发挥。
提示： 1.13 岁，长头发，大眼睛； 2.来自上海，父亲是酒店经理，母亲是英语教师； 3.家在学校附近，喜欢早上在学校操场打篮球。
Zhang Hong is my classmate. She is thirteen years old with long hairs andtwo big eyes. She is from Shanghai. Shanghai is a very big city. There arethree people in her family: her father, her mother and she. Her father isthe manager of a hotel and her mother is an English teacher at a school.Her home is near our school. She likes playing basketball on theplayground in the morning.This is my classmate and we are good friends.
5你的学校漂亮吗？你喜欢它吗？你的学校有哪些建筑物？请根据 Module3 所学 的词汇、短语及句型，写一篇 60 词左右的短文向大家介绍你的校园。
My school is very beautiful. I like it very much. There is a classroombuilding, a library, a playground, a science building, an office buildingand a dining hall in my school. The classroom building is between theoffice building and the library. There are many books in the library. Thescience building is near library. On the left of the science building, thereis a dining hall. The playground is behind the dining hall.6假如你是王勇，右图为你学校的地 图，请根据下面提示，写一篇不少 于 60 词的英语短文，介绍你的学校。
图书馆提示：1.注意 there be 句型 及方位介词的使用； 2.短文开头已给出，不计入 总数； 3.词语提示：garden 花园教学楼 办公楼餐厅 实验楼 花园 大门操场Hello. I’m Wang Yong. This is a map of our school. There are fivebuildings in our school: a library, a classroom building, an office building,a dining hall and a lab building.There is a small garden near the gate. Onthe left of the garden, there is an office building. Behind the officebuilding is the classroom building with 24 classrooms. And there is alibrary behind it. Next to the library is a dining hall. There is a labbuilding in front of the dining hall. The playground is on the right of theschool. It is very large.Our school is nice and big. Welcome to our school!
提示：Breakfastone egg, some breadLunchvegetables, rice, meatDinnerchicken, vegetables, fruit注意：内容可适当拓展，60 词左右。
Hello! My name is Tom. I’m from America. Here is my food and drink.I eat one egg and some bread for breakfast at home. I have lunch atschool with my classmates. There are vegetables, rice and meat for lunchin the dining hall. The lunch is good. I have dinner at home with myparents. We have chicken, vegetables and after dinner we have somefruit.8请以“How to keep healthy”为题，用英语写一篇 70 词左右的短文，介绍你保 持健康的方法。
Everybody wants to be healthy. We all know food is very important.There are many healthy foods. You can have more bananas, apples,oranges, tomatoes and carrots, because fruit and vegetables are good foryou. But don’t eat too much chocolate. It is not healthy food. Healthyfood can make you strong and happy. Remember there is a saying—“Anapple a day keeps the doctor away”. Sports can also keep you healthy.Get up early and do some sports every day. Don’t be lazy. You will behealthy and happy.
9某英文报正在以 My school day 为题向中 学生展开征文活动。
假如你叫 Jeeny，请根 据表格中的内容，写一篇英文小短文参加 活动。
内容可以适当扩展，词数不少于 70 词。
My school dayI’m Jenny. I get up at half past six in6:30 am 7:30 am 8:00 am 4:20 pm 5:00 pm 6:00 pm 9:20 pm起床 上学 开始上课 放学 回家 吃晚饭 上床睡觉the morning and then I have my breakfast. I go to school at half pastseven and I start work at eight o’clock. We have seven lessons a day. Ifinish school at twenty past four and then I go home at five o’clock. Ihave dinner with my family at six o’clock. At seven o’clock I do myhomework. I go to bed at twenty past nine. What a busy day!10假如你叫李浩，右面是你一天的活动，请根据 表格内容写一篇题为“My school day”的小短 文。
ActivitiesGet upMy school dayGo to schoolHello! I’m Li Hao. I get up at six o’clock Lessons startHave a breakin the morning. I go to school by bike atHave lunch Lessons startseven o’clock. Lessons start at twenty toGo home Have dinnereight. There are four lessons in the morning. Do homeworkGo to bedWe have a break at half past nine. I haveTime6:007:00 7:40 9:30 12:00 2:00 5:20 6:30 7:00-9:00 9:30lunch at school at twelve o’clock. Lessons start at two o’clock in theafternoon. I go home at five twenty. In the evening, I have dinner at halfpast six. I do my homework from seven to nine. Then I go to bed at halfpast nine. This is my school day. Can you tell me about your school day?
内容可适当拓展，词数不少于 70.I’m Lisa and I’m twelve years old. I come from England. I’m in Beijingwith my parents now. I like China very much. I eat rice and vegetablesevery day. Sometimes I eat noodles with beef and potatoes. They arehealthy food. My favourite vegetables are carrots and tomatoes. Cola ismy favourite drink but it isn’t healthy. Too much sugar is bad for us. Idon’t like tea, but my parents like it very much. I like fruit. Apples are myfavourite . I eat two apples a day.12假设一家英文报社正在以“My good friend”为题征集作品。
提示： 1.好朋友名字叫 Alice，来自英国，现在北京教学；2.九点钟上课，周一和周五上午两节课； 3.最喜欢中国饺子； 4.认为北京市一座美丽的城市。
My good friendI have a good friend. Her name is Alice. She comes from England. Sheteaches English in Beijing now. She starts work at nine o’clock and shegives two lessons on Monday and Friday mornings. She likes startinglessons with English songs. And she is kind to her students. They like hervery much.Dumplings are her favourite Chinese food. She can eat them in theschool dining hall. She thinks Beijing is big and beautiful.
可以适 当扩展，不少于 70 词。
提示： 1.有一个动物园，我喜欢那里的老虎和大象；2.老虎大约两岁，来自哈尔滨，很强壮； 3.大象是亚洲象，高大且性格温和。
There is a zoo near my home. There are many kinds of animals in thezoo, such as bears, zebras and giraffes. They come from differentcountries and they eat different food. I like tigers and elephants there.There are two tigers and they are from Harbin. They are about two yearsold and they are strong. They are a little dangerous so I stay away fromthem. The elephants are from Asia. They are big and tall and they arekind. So I usually stand near them. The elephants like eating the grass inmy hands. What’s your favourite animal?14请根据表格中内容提示，以“A visit to the zoo”为题介绍一下动物园里新来的两 只动物。
animalnamefromfoodcharacteragepandaFeifeiChinaBamboo Lovely, shy2lionKarlAfricaMeatStrong,dangerous 3A visit to the zooThere are two new animals in the zoo. The panda’s name is Feifei.She is from China. She likes eating bamboo. She is lovely and shy. She istwo years old. The other animal is a lion. His name is Karl. He is fromAfrica. He likes eating meat. He is very strong and dangerous. He is threeyears old. I love them very much.
内容可适当拓展，不少于 70 词。
提示： 1.13 岁，在武汉上学；2.每天早上八点开始上课，四节课，下午上三节课，五点半放学； 3.最喜欢计算机课，善用计算机做事情； 4.周末通常玩电脑游戏或者打篮球。
Li Min is my good friend. She is a thirteen-year-old girl, and shestudies in Wuhan. In the morning, she starts work at eight o’clock and shehas four lessons. There are three lessons in the afternoon. She finishesschool at half past five in the afternoon.Her favourite subject is computer. She is good at using the computer.She can write her homework and talk with her friends on the computer.At weekends she usually plays computer games or plays basketball withher friends. This is my good friend. Who is your friend?16假如你在网上结识了一个名叫 Jenny 的网友，请根据她发的有关信息，向你的同学简单的介绍一下她。
I have a net friend. Her name姓名 籍贯 家庭情况爱好Jenny年龄15英国伦敦市学校Apple Tree School父亲是老师，母亲是经理，两个哥哥是工人，一个妹妹是学生爱吃米饭、肉和蔬菜；喜欢读书、上网聊天（chat）is Jenny. She is from London, England. She is fifteen years old andstudies at Apple Tree School. There are six people in her family. Herfather is a teacher and her mother is a manager. She has got two brothers.They are workers. She has also got a sister. She is a student too. She likesto eat meat, rice and vegetables. In her free time, she likes reading andchatting on the Internet with her friends. I like my net friend very much.
内容可适当 拓展，不少于 70 词。
爸爸 妈妈 妹妹 朋友们一台电脑 一个蛋糕 一首歌 花、钢笔和贺卡等My name is Li Hang. I’m twelve years old. Today is my birthday. My parents have a birthday party for me at home. At the party, I get a lot ofpresents. My father gives me a new computer. My mother makes a big birthday cake for me. My little sister sings Happy Birthday to me. Myfriends give me flowers, pens, cards and so on. I am very happy today and I love them.18假如你是周杰，这 个周日是你妈妈的 生日。
你和爸爸、 妹妹都想给她一份 特别的礼物。
请根Who Your father Your sister Youpresent 一件漂亮的连衣裙 一个大蛋糕 自己制作一张贺卡why 妈妈喜欢漂亮的衣服 给妈妈带来好运 这份礼物很特殊据表格提示，以“Special Presents for Mother ”为题，写一篇不少于 60 词的英语短文。
参考词汇：bring good luck 带来好运Special presents for motherHi, my name is Zhou Jie. This Sunday is my mother’s birthday. My father, my sister and I give her some special presents. My mother likes goingshopping and always buys expensive clothes. So my father gives her abeautiful dress. My sister makes a big birthday cake for my mother andshe thinks the big cake can bring good luck to mother. I make a birthdaycard for her. I think it is special. My mother is happy to see thesepresents.
内容可适当扩展， 词数不少于 70。
My name is Wang Hong. There is a computer at my home. I can use it todo many things. I often use the computer to do my homework and getsome information for my homework. I often talk with my friends andlisten to music on the Internet. Sometimes I send emails to my friends. Ialso go on the Internet to check the times of trains. I like the computervery much. It is my good friend.今天是星期天，天气很好， 公园里有许多人。
他们在干 什么呢？请根据表格内容 写一篇英文小短文。
词数不 少于 70 词。
20人物 一个女孩 一个男孩 一个年轻人 一些妇女 一些男孩活动 拍照 吃冰激凌 湖边画画 跳舞 有的踢足球，有的晒太阳、交谈Today is Sunday. The weather is very good. There are a lot of people inthe park. What are they doing? Look! A girl is taking photos with herparents. A boy is eating an ice cream and a young man is drawing nearthe lake. Some women are dancing under the big tree. There are someboys on the grass. Some of them are playing football and the others arelying in the sun and talking.How happy they are!
请根据表格内容写一篇 70 词左右的英文 短文，给大家介绍你们的准备活动。
Spring festival is coming. My family成员 爸爸和弟弟 妈妈和妹妹 爷爷 奶奶和我活动 打扫房子 购物 做灯笼 包饺子members are getting ready for it.Look! My father and my little brother are cleaning our house andsweeping away bad luck. My mother is doing some shopping with mylittle sister. They buy a lot of presents. My grandfather is making redlanterns. They look very beautiful. My grandmother is making jiaozi inthe kitchen. I’m helping her there.We are all happy.22今天周六，是王林的生日，但他父母不在身 边。
注意：用上现在进行时；词数不少于 80.It is Saturday. But we are all in the人物 李阳 王红 李华和赵燕 英语老师 汤姆 我和杰克活动 唱歌 弹钢琴 跳舞 与一些学生交谈 制作生日卡片 制作生日蛋糕classroom. We are getting ready for Wang Lin’s birthday party. Look! LiYang is singing an English song. Who is playing the piano? It is WangHong. She plays very well. What are Li Hua and Zhao Yan doing? Theyare dancing. Where is our English teacher? Oh, she is talking with somestudents. Tom is making some birthday cards and I am making a birthdaycake with Jack. We are all very busy but happy.
23假如你是 Ann,正和父母在海德公园（Hyde Park）度假。
现在是星期一上午十点， 请给你的祖母寄一张明信片，告诉她你们正在做的事情：妈妈正坐在椅子上看 书，爸爸正和一位来自美国的叔叔打网球。
Dear Grandma, Greeting from Hyde Park! I’m enjoying myself in Hyde Park with my parents. The park is bigand beautiful. My mother is sitting on a chair and reading a book. My father is playing tennis with an uncle from America. They are enjoying themselves. What are you doing? Please tell me. See you!Yours, Ann24假如你是王力，春节到了，你想给你的国外朋友 Jim 写一封信。
心中要表达你 的祝福，告诉 Jim 你正在做的事情，并询问他正在做什么。
Dear Jim, The Spring Festival is coming. And we are getting ready for it. MYmother is cooking food for the festival. My father and I are decorating the house. Parents don’t need to go to work and I don’t need to go to school. We usually make dumplings together, and we usually get new clothes and presents. What are you doing now? Are you getting ready for the coming New Year? Tell me about the things you are doing.Best wishes. Yours,Wang Li
25请根据以下内容写一篇小短文，介绍你的朋友 Tom. Tom 是美国人，今年 13 岁，在北京市第 12 中学学习。
提示词语：No.12 Middle SchoolHello, everyone. I have a good friend. His name is Tom. He is fromAmerica. He is thirteen years old this year. He likes China very much. Heis studying in No.12 Middle School of Beijing now. He is good atEnglish and he speaks Chinese well too.Tom likes ball games very much. His favourite sport isfootball. He often plays football with his classmates in theplayground after school.26假如你所在的学校将举办一次以“My Good Friend”为题的英语征文活动，请 根据下列提示，写一篇 50 词左右的短文。
要点提示：1. 王娟今年 13 岁，是七年级 5 班的学生；2.她每天骑自行车上学； 3.她最喜欢的科目是英语和音乐； 4.她喜欢唱歌、弹钢琴、打网球。
My Good FriendWang Juan is my good friend. She is 13 years old. She is a student inClass 5, Grade 7. She rides a bike to school every day. Her favouritesubjects are English and music. She likes singing, playing the piano andplaying tennis. She often plays tennis with me on Sunday.
做好“书面表 达”这道题，学生应该从以下几方面人手： 一、充分准备,打好基础。
要对所提供的 信息加以分析、整理，使之更加具体化、条理化，为开始动笔做好准备工作，还 要搞清题目的要求，以便根据不同的题材、体裁，写出不同格式，风格各异的文 章，此外，还要注意人称、时态、地点等信息，避免出错。
要正确使用关联词，如 and，or，but，so，because， since 等，以便行文自然流畅。
首先要检查主题是 否明确，表达方式是否恰当，接下来检查所写内容是否切题，该交待的内容是 否交待了，最后检查所用时态、人称是否符合要求，最后是否一致。
写完后，还应仔细校阅 1—2 遍。
因此，要写好一篇作文，不仅需要具有丰富的思想内容，掌握扎实的词汇、语 法及修辞等方面的语言基本功，而且还需要掌握因不同思维方式和文化背景而 形成的英语特有的篇章机构模式 惟有这样才能进行最有效的书面交际活动。
总而言之，在初中英语写作教学中，我们要注意取百家之长，多方面改进教学的 方法和技巧，同时也要根据自己教学的实际情况，适当的进行调整以顺应不断更 新课程要求，扬长避短，使得英语作文成为带动教学的有力臂膀。
另 外，对于一些常见人名，大家要会区分男女，以确定用 he，还是 she 来代替。
例如：Lily， Betty，Helen，Lucy，Jenny， Ann 等都是 女名，Tony， Tom，John，Sam, Jack 等都是男名，这需要大家 平时多留心。
这就需要大 家平时认真背诵课文，多思考如何应用课文中所学句子去仿写一篇相 似的文章。
例如介绍动物园里的动物时，大家完全可以用上 Module6 Unit1 里“There are many kinds of animals in the zoo, such as….They come from many different countries and they eat different food”.总之，遇到不熟悉的题目不要慌张，一点点分析， 用学过的、写过的内容去解决遇到的问题。
5. 对于程度好的同学，可以适当变化各种句式，采用难词、生词，但必须 保证内容正确的前提下，否则是弄巧成拙。
对于平时作文得分在 5 分以下甚至不写作文的同学，除了要做到以上 方面外，平时要多背诵范文，考试时可以去阅读理解中寻找相关的句 子，能多写对一句就写对一句。
实在不会写，去参照阅读理解，然后根 据作文内容进行适当修改，哪怕只写对一个句子，也不要空着！！！望同学们认真复习，期末取得个好成绩！第五档（9 —1 0 分）：很好 地完成了规定 的写作任务。
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